Haiku Happiness
Poetry Train Monday Presents:
Comments left excite
Fame in the void surges need
Cravings build the blog
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13 Comments:
This is a brilliant haiku - made me laugh, as I rushed home from work today to start leaving comments for Poetry Train . . .
Love the last line: Cravings build the blog - there's definitely a story there.
Thanks for visiting!
Ok, now I need to learn how to write haikus. Good job!
i love the unspoken cyclical aspect of this. and "fame in the void surges need" just plain out gave me goosebumps - adore that line.
Get OUT of my brain already!
(who loves you, girlfriend?)
Love it. Love the haiku format anyway, but really enjoyed this :)
Hugs,
anna
"Comments left excite"
You've encapsulated my blog wonder perfectly!
Susan, you are the bestest! If I could parade outside an agents office with a "sign Susan NOW!" sign, I would! :)
I do believe you've found a hidden talent, Rashenbo! Your poetry ROCKS week after week. I love this one...
"fame in the void surges need"
How did you come up with that?
That was great, LOL! I've never had the courage to try writing haiku, but I love to read it.
Thank you for the early morning smile. :D
Gotta love Haikus!!
Great haiku. I remember writing those things in school - but they were never about anything real.
It is with pleasure that I look at your site; he is fantastic. Really very pleasant to read your lovely shares. Continue like this and thank you again.
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